Friday, 6 March 2015

OUGD505 Interim Concept Pitch & Feedback

Gained some useful feedback from the session which as given me a lot of help to where to take the project. Below is the boards I presented and the comments/feedback I received. 








Peer Feedback

Comments on research to date: 

- Shocking and interesting theme, very important for what's going on now.
- Watch '16 Blocks' it might be based on a true story about police committing crimes to solve crimes.
- Really important/relevant issue in todays society that needs to be addressed and dealt with. Its good that your research is both historical and recent, shows it has been an ongoing issue. 
- Good shock statistics.
- Shock factor definitely a strong point. 
- TED Talk Evil Guard Study.

Improvement:

- Target UK.
- Focus on human rights.
- Decide on specific angle - target the police or the victims of brutality. 
- Psychological side of criminal/police minds.  
- Use shock tactics to expose to audience. 

Further development: 

- Focus on convicting police - police aren't above the law. 
- Psychological route - de-individualisation - Zimbardo prison study. 
- Get people to feel more comfortable around police, get them to know their rights. 
- Investigate real change - take a unique approach. 
- Who are you going to target?
- How would you represent it? Think of formats.    


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